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The Failures in Utopian communities are very large in number my one example is a person named Frances Wright. She wanted to create a utopia where African Americans, and Woman (which was rare at the time). In fact she made the Utopia for the reason of equality to all people. Unfortunately it failed due to lack of members… her failure feeds me. There are many other Utopian failures which I will also talk about.

Next thing I’m going to do is the Shakers which is much bigger… or is it? Yeah it is. They had no pleasantries and they lived of the simplest of things… yup I’d kill myself on day one. They tried making another in a new country in India FAIL! By doing some current research I found out that only one is left and with less then 10 members! I’m pleased. That’s major Failure. I couldn’t find how they failed but my theory goes with the younger generation either saw the improvements in the outside world and wanted to join leaving the old generation to die or they did not like the lifestyle with confessing their sins and other stuff like that. My other theory is they went corrupt after their leader died. The leader said dying when less of 5 of them remain they will grow again… Well they haven’t got there yet but I doubt it. Keep telling yourself that, keep telling yourself that. creating a small place where people can live won’t work. People need to change on there own and following the ideas of how to help yourself by one person will not create a utopia. Now… who wants tojoin my utopia : )

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Thesis- What are the common traits of two soldiers who are against each other and on different sides?

Well now I’m going to sum up the diaries of two soldiers, one south and one north, and see if their lives are that different because of the war. [] What I learned from this site Diary of Edward Johnson Confederate.

From what I read it seemed that he joined the army… no surprise there… really. His personal life showed of graduating school joining to help people he cared for ETC, ETC. Predictable soldier stuff, predictable soldier stuff. Mentioning of Lee who owned when in came down to war. But that’s another story unfortunately besides that this part is just predictable. *Sigh* I found out this regiment had to camp in heavy storms, and very unbearable living places. Besides that they seemed they had to train a lot but he doesn’t seem to be writing about fighting anyone. But it seems like the union came to attack them after a while but they escaped and weren’t really hurt. Of course a few people were hurt/killed.. No massacre here. Since I don’t like bloodshed this is nice but showing struggle with battles doesn’t show some positive reception. They escaped with only a few people dead. But the people that did die or get injured had a very descriptive view of what’s happening to them, the twisting of legs, the bloody bodies, the cries of help from the people who you don’t know if the will make it. He realizes the terrible things of war. Soon after that there really isn’t much going on. Well there is Christmas Yay! They amuse themselves and enjoy their life. But soon after his uncle dies when he’s not there, but the funny thing is he never says if he was in the war or not or even if he died from the war. He says war is affecting everyone but I don’t see anything confirming it. Soon after he can leave the army or rein-list of course he has no will to rejoin. I’m pretty sure he leaves but the diary doesn’t really seem to confirm it one way or another.

[] Well the person who wrote it was Henry W. Tisdale This guy seems to be on the Union side. Well let’s get started. Well it seems like he’s joining for his country while other people joined for cash, or at least that’s what he thinks, in all honesty I can’t blame them… the people joining for money. It seems like army jobs aren’t as hard as he thought but he hasn’t fought yet so I don’t think he’ll agree for long. Soon later he got his equipment and his sister visited him while his regiment was around them. Now that we learned enough about his life lets just skip to his opinion of war after the first battle. He entered a battle against the rebels. Soon he saw a rebel who was wounded asking for food Henry gave him some bread. He learned a lot of the person. He saved his enemy wow, talk about a nice person, I know I’d have mixed feelings on that. Well anyways after that all the people just went to the hospital the southerners got more attention. But later the doctor said they must be fair to all people. Which I find interesting, I mean if I saw somebody who I know is against your beliefs and trying to attack you because of it I wouldn’t help them I’d leave them for dead and hope for the worst. Soon after that it seems like he had a Thanksgiving celebration. Then they had to go through the extremely cold winter. He went to the hospital for his wounds after another battle then it ends on new years.

Those are the diaries of a confederate and a union soldier during the civil war. As you can see they generally went through the same thing but it seemed as if the confederate had the harder time. But anyways I thought this research wasn’t half bad. It showed soldiers went through similar things but when it came down to it they had some differences too. Overall I got the information I wanted.

Comparison- They are different when it comes to their lives and how the war affected them. But they did join which means it affected both of them. After joining neither of them wanted to stay after their first battle and they wanted to be closer to home. If I could learn a little of their personal lives it’d be easier to compare but that’s not what I’m doing. Now it seemed they didn’t like the war and the battles that came with it but I think that they have a lot of differences. For EX- I didn’t read anywhere on the union soldier that his family was hurt or affected by war, but the confederate soldier had his uncle die in the war, never find out how. Another way that they were different was how they felt after the first battle. Of course neither took it well but from reading the diary I can see that the confederate was obviously more affected because of the war then the union soldier. OF course this may be because the confederate just got worse and bloodier battles, this prediction makes enough sense because of how much more the confederate talked about the battles and they were more descriptive. The union and confederate soldier are much more different then I thought.

So in the end the similarities between the two sides make them interesting. We also got to see the story of the civil war in their eyes. That was also entertaining. Overall I think the soldiers both had problems.

So yeah I lost a better version... so this is all i got

So memorible moments in MS right?

Funniest... THe talent show... I think I'm funny but I'm not that arrogent... I'm .5 less then you would think : D

Saddest- Umm... end of summer in 6th because 7th grade for me was Preeeeeety bad.

Most memorable- The emotional scarring... It happens every year... *sign*

If I could give middle school a score

6th- 7/10 looking back I had Waaaaaaay to much help in 6th 7- 5/10 Only one teacher was good! One was scary one was scrict and one was boring. 8- 8/10 I liked it not much to complain about Yeah... so I woulod even it out but they are all done differently by different people so that would be fair.