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Topic:Utopian Communities

Focus: To become the perfect society

Reason for choice: to show people how life was back then

What's your point? (thesis): People tryed to make the world perfect and they failed to do that. it is better to try and fail then to do nothing at all.

What three reasons do you have that will back up your point?

1. there are no perfect people today

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3. Shakers tried to make perfect society

What is your first reason and three to five facts to support it? If we are not perfect today then how are we ever going to become perfect ever. and if we try and fail to become it then we are the perfect ones that tried and failed to become it. They are no perfect societys in todays world and all society have problems like crime, murder,

What is your second reason and three to five facts to support it?

What is your third reason and three to five facts to support it? The shakers is a group of people that was trying to become a perfect society and they failed to do it so that makes them a failer to the world. They have had a utopian presence in the us for over 200 hundred years. And only ten of the members are left so they are not successful. Some girl got told by god that there place to the west in the new world was were to find the Utopian communtians.

Based on your research, what conclusions would you make and how does your research connect to your life? my research connect to my life is the same how no one is not perfect.

Ideas on how you are going to present? Involve the class? Be exciting? Interesting? Wow? Huh? Ahhh?