Constitution+erictp11

Me and 12 other of my classmates were going on a feild trip to another planet. But the ship crashed and now a bunch of 12 and 13 year old kids are stranded on another planet and we have to create rules and get out of here. So we made six stages of rules justice, peace, welfare, defence, freedom, and future and 4 people created three rules for each stage. After everyone was finished, we looked over the rules and tried to improve it. We tried to create fair rules that everyone can understand and follow without arguing with anyone else. So now, we have 18 easy and simple rules that everyone can follow until we finally finish the ship and go home.

As I went through my researh on the Constitution, I came across was that the Constitution was written from people all over the thirteen Colonies. They all met to create a giant document of rules like we all met up to create rules for the planet we crashed on. Everyone had their duties to make the rules better and everyone was assigned something to do, this was like our group because 2 people were assigned a stage and had to create three rules for that stage. And like the writers of the Constitution, people were assigned to edit and revise the Constitution or find rules they didn't like. I was assigned to go over the rules and make them better just like those men assigned to go over the Constitution.

When we got our rules together, we all never wanted to have a leader and we wanted everyone to have an even share of work. But when the writers of the Constitution all came together, as soon as the meeting started they elected George Washington president of the United States getting higher order over everyone else. This is a huge difference because it shows that we didn't want anybody to control the meeting, but the writers of the Constitution wanted someone to lead them in the right track. I'm not saying it's wrong to have a leader, I'm just saying we had different opinions than the authors of the Constitution at the time.So even though we were kind of being like the writers of the Constitution, we still had different ideas.

One rule that we had that was similar to the Constitution was that everyone who commited a crime must be punished. Maybe our consequences were a little bit different to their rules, but we each had a goal to have everyone fair and civilized. One of our punishments were that if you broke a certain law you would get sent to jail for some period of time. This was just like the laws of the Constitution except jail time for them was much longer than jail time for us. This shows that sometimes we had to look into one of the most important documents of laws to find peace and justice while on this planet.

One rule that was different from ours compared to the Constitution was that one our laws were all men and women were created equal. Back in the times of the Constitution, the only people in the U.S. with power were white men. But ever since people of different races and women got their rights, everything was fair and orderly as America is today. When I was on the planet, we all decided that there will be no social classes and everyone had the same amount of jobs, food, and supplies. But back then only white men had rights and only they decided the fate of our country, but now evertything is fair and orderly just as it was on the planet.

After the creation of our planets Constitution, we've had everything as orderly as can be with everyone following the rules and having equal jobs and supplies. Just as after the Constitution, everything became peacful and in order just as everyone in America had excpected. So after a few years on the planet, we all returned home mutured and responsible. And if it weren't for our class learning about the Constitution, we would still be on that planet unorderly and everyone going crazy. So now I can't help but thank the Constituion for giving us the knowledge of how to set up our rules in such a difficult time.