Presidential+Primary+Evaluation+NR

Name NR (smilealways) Class Sapphire

What was the point of your work? The point of my work was to convince young voters to vote for Hillary in the 2008 ellection. This website was targeted mainly towards democtrats, because they agree more with Hillary's points of views compared to republicans. However, this site was also targeted towards republicians because they would also be allowed to vote for Hillary if she is one of the two final canidates running for president in November.

What were the strengths of your message? One of the strengths of my messgae is that I make connections that happen to people in thier every day life; which makes the reader (voter) want to vote for Hillary because they feel that she will be able to make a change in the parts of the goverment that may not agree with. I also targeted this website to all different types of people, because the more supporters that Hillary has the more likely she will become our next president.

What were the weaknesses of your message? The weakness of my message is that I didn't thouroughly explain what her goals are as president.

What were the strengths of your wiki? Examples? One of the strenghts of my wiki was that I supported my facts with technology (including pictures and videos) to give the viewer more in depth examples of what Hillary will do if she becomes president. For example, when I stated that Hillary wants change in the goverment I supported the fact by adding on videos of what she wants to change, so the reader will understand what she wants to change.

What were the weaknesses? Examples? The weakness of my wiki is that I had pictures that did not have a purpose or related to Hillary Clinton in any way what-so-ever. For example, there is a picture of a cat on the page with the members thoughts.

How does your final product show the results of careful planning? What is the evidence? The final product shows the result of careful planning because the reader can tell that I did not just randomly place in pictures and videos to fill in space. Evidence that supports this statement is the pictures are lined up neatly and the videos have links to them and I explained the purpose of each video

How does your final product show academic growth? What is the evidence? My final product shows academic growht because before I started this project I knew little about the presdiencial process. For example, I did not know what a caucus was and I didn't know who the presidencial canidates were.

How does your final product show technical growth? What is the evidence? This project shows a lot of technical growth on the wiki because I am more used to using the blog. For example, when I first started this project I didn't know how to make a new page or put in videos from another site.

Were you creative? Evidence? Yes I was creative because I thought beyond the basic textbook answer. Instead I used a variety of media including pictures and videos to inform the reader about Hillary Clinton and what she wants to change in the goverment. For example, when you take a quick glance at the wiki you can see that only about 30 percent of it is text.

Are you proud of what you produced? Why? Yes I am proud of what I produced because I believe that by visiting this wiki the reader will strongly consider voting for Hillary in the November 2008 ellection.

Please score the following from a 1-->10 with 10 being the highest.


 * 1) In class effort 9
 * 2) At home effort 8
 * 3) Research and Notes 8
 * 4) Planning 9
 * 5) Did your final product have a point and communicate it clearly? 9
 * 6) How does your wiki flow? 10
 * 7) Design 9
 * 8) "Spirit and soul"
 * 9) I gave honest answers to all of the above questions 10

Any comments(If you have any comments that should remain private please wiki mail them to me): I enjoyed working on this project because it gave me a chance to be creative and think beyond the basic facts to create a webpage that would immediately grab the reader's attention.

What do you believe your grade should be? 90 (A-)