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 * AJP

To convince people and tell them to vote for the best president to come: Barack Obama
 * //__What was the point of your work?__//**

That Barack Obama is going help America so much and help those starving kids in Africa.
 * //__What were the strengths of your message?__//**

I didn't put too many facts about him. I only used about 5 things that he would do to help the comunity.
 * //__What were the weaknesses of your message?__//**

My wiki has a lot of facts about Obama and what he is planning to do. I have quotes and pictures to state the fact.
 * //__What were the strengths of your wiki? Examples?__//**

It could have more Information about his life?
 * //__What were the weaknesses? Examples?__//**

It shows alot of facts that I looked up myself and shows that i took time to look it up and take notes.
 * //__How does your final product show the results of careful planning? What is the evidence?__//**

He is going to help kids all over the world with education, poverty, troops in Iraq and much more.
 * //__How does your final product show academic growth? What is the evidence?__//**


 * //__How does your final product show technical growth? What is the evidence?__//**

Yes I was creative in my pictures that connect my posts to the pictures. I was creative in the picture with Barack Obama as Borat. I had two quotes that you can refer to if you have trouble voting for him.
 * //__Were you creative? Evidence?__//**

Yes because if people vote for Obama hopefully they looked at my wiki or maybe the news and new so much about him and what he was going to be doing wiith our country.
 * //__Are you proud of what you produced? Why?__//**


 * //__Please score the following from a 1-->10 with 10 being the highest.__//**


 * 1) In class effort **-10**
 * 2) At home effort **-6**
 * 3) Research and Notes **-9**
 * 4) Planning -**10**
 * 5) Did your final product have a point and communicate it clearly? **-10**
 * 6) How does your wiki flow? **-8**
 * 7) Design **-8**
 * 8) "Spirit and soul" **-8**
 * 9) I gave honest answers to all of the above questions **-9**

UHHH I worked hard and I belive if you look at my wiki you can tell. I didn't have alot of griffity or anything like alot of other wiki's had but i think mine still looks fine.
 * //__Any comments(If you have any comments that should remain private please wiki mail them to me):__//**

I believe my grade should be about an A- because i worked hard and by far I think this is the best wiki post that i ahve done all year.
 * //__What do you believe your grade should be?__//**